--- url: https://gaojian.site/ielts-writing/36-maps-2.md description: A 类 Task 1写作训练：学校扩建：现状与方案。看懂题目，读熟表达，回忆后换题使用。 --- # 正文 29｜学校扩建：现状与方案 ## 本节题目 > The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2024.(Source: Official IELTS Practice Materials 2) ## 看图读范文 · 图文对照 ### 参考回答 The two pictures compare the layout of a school as it was in the year 2004 with a proposed site design for the year 2024. It is clear that the main change for 2024 involves the addition of a new school building. The school will then be able to accommodate a considerably larger number of students. In 2004, there were 600 pupils attending the school, and the two school buildings were separated by a path running from the main entrance to the sports field. By 2024, it is expected that there will be 1000 pupils, and a third building will have been constructed. Furthermore, the plan is to join the two original buildings together, creating a shorter path that links the buildings only. As the third building and a second car park will be built on the site of the original sports field, a new, smaller sports field will need to be laid. A new road will also be built from the main entrance to the second car park. Finally, no changes will be made to the main entrance and original car park. ## 本题句型 · 看到这种关系，怎样起句 现状与规划 · 先读本题句，再记表达关系。骨架中的省略号需要换成新题的信息，并调整时态与数量。 01 · 引言 · 交代对象与范围 看到题目，先说明图表展示什么。 **可用骨架** > The map / diagrams show… / compare… **本题原句** > The two pictures compare the layout of a school as it was in the year 2004 with a proposed site design for the year 2024. 对象、地点、时期与图表数量随题目变化。用熟悉表达准确改述即可。 02 · 概述 · 抓住整体关系 新增校舍与停车场；体育场移动并缩小；部分入口与设施保留。 **可用骨架** > The main change in the proposed plan is the addition of… **本题原句** > It is clear that the main change for 2024 involves the addition of a new school building. The school will then be able to accommodate a considerably larger number of students. 区分已有设施与规划设施。方案年份已过去，也不能据此写成实际完工事实。 03 · 细节 · 用信息支撑概述 新增连接设施一组，移动、缩小与不变设施一组。 **可用骨架** > A new… is proposed… / … would be relocated to… **本题原句** > In 2004, there were 600 pupils attending the school, and the two school buildings were separated by a path running from the main entrance to the sports field. proposed plan表示计划，不因年份已经过去就认定工程实际完工。 ## 选择与组织 · 为什么这样写 ### 先找关键特征 新增校舍与停车场；体育场移动并缩小；部分入口与设施保留。 ### 怎样决定分组 新增连接设施一组，移动、缩小与不变设施一组。 ### 为什么这样选择 没有变化的主要入口值得提，因为它提供稳定参照；不能只列新增建筑。 ## 语言与精度 · 本节重点 proposed plan表示计划，不因年份已经过去就认定工程实际完工。 ## 最后练一练 · 先组织，再写 读熟后，可以先遮住参考，回忆本节最有用的两三句。想动笔时再打开下方写作台，不需要首次学习就完成全文。 ### 定点练习 把“The third building was built in 2024.”改为方案表述。 ::: details 写完后看一种参考处理 > A third building is proposed for the 2024 layout. 检查它修正了什么意义或关系。可以使用不同措辞，但信息需要准确。 ::: ### 换题使用 **本站自编文字数据 · 与上方原题分开** 自编方案：现状学校有2栋校舍、北侧运动场、东侧停车场；方案新增第3栋，运动场移至南侧，停车场保留。写整体变化与一个细节段。 先试一段，再视需要写全文。将新内容写在写作台的“迁移”中；原稿留在“初稿”，修订另存到“修改”。图表题需要重新识别特征，书信与议论文需要重新回应任务。 ::: details 打开写作台 · 短练、全文与复盘 > The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2024.(Source: Official IELTS Practice Materials 2) 全文练习至少150词，约20分钟；短练可以先写两三句或一个段落。 **留一个复盘**：我能回忆哪组表达？换了内容后，哪一句还不熟？下一次先检查这个问题。 :::