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# 正文 07｜奥运奖牌：比较总量与构成

## 本节题目

> The chart below shows the total number of Olympic medals won by twelve different countries.

## 看图读范文 · 图文对照

### 参考回答

The bar chart compares twelve countries in terms of the overall number of medals that they have won at the Olympic Games.

It is clear that the USA is by far the most successful Olympic medal-winning nation. It is also noticeable that the figures for gold, silver and bronze medals won by any particular country tend to be fairly similar.

The USA has won a total of around 2,300 Olympic medals, including approximately 900 gold medals, 750 silver and 650 bronze. In second place on the all-time medals chart is the Soviet Union, with just over 1,000 medals. Again, the number of gold medals won by this country is slightly higher than the number of silver or bronze medals.

Only four other countries - the UK, France, Germany and Italy - have won more than 500 Olympic medals, all with similar proportions of each medal colour. Apart from the USA and the Soviet Union, China is the only other country with a noticeably higher proportion of gold medals (about 200) compared to silver and bronze (about 100 each).

## 本题句型 · 看到这种关系，怎样起句

静态比较 · 先读本题句，再记表达关系。骨架中的省略号需要换成新题的信息，并调整时态与数量。

01 · 引言 · 交代对象与范围

看到题目，先说明图表展示什么。

**可用骨架**

> The chart / table compares… in terms of…

**本题原句**

> The bar chart compares twelve countries in terms of the overall number of medals that they have won at the Olympic Games.

对象、地点、时期与图表数量随题目变化。用熟悉表达准确改述即可。

02 · 概述 · 抓住整体关系

美国总量远高于其他国家；多数国家三种奖牌数量相近；部分国家金牌更突出。

**可用骨架**

> Overall, A had the largest…, while B…

**本题原句**

> It is clear that the USA is by far the most successful Olympic medal-winning nation. It is also noticeable that the figures for gold, silver and bronze medals won by any particular country tend to be fairly similar.

比较同一指标的类别。静态信息不添加上升下降；先确认数字是数量、占比还是金额。

03 · 细节 · 用信息支撑概述

先处理总量领先者，再处理其余国家及奖牌构成。

**可用骨架**

> The figure for A was higher than that for B, at… and… respectively.

**本题原句**

> The USA has won a total of around 2,300 Olympic medals, including approximately 900 gold medals, 750 silver and 650 bronze.

number of medals是奖牌数；proportion of gold medals是金牌在奖牌总数中的占比。

## 选择与组织 · 为什么这样写

### 先找关键特征

美国总量远高于其他国家；多数国家三种奖牌数量相近；部分国家金牌更突出。

### 怎样决定分组

先处理总量领先者，再处理其余国家及奖牌构成。

### 为什么这样选择

最高总量值得单独写，因为差距巨大；其余国家可概括成组，避免十二国名单占满全文。

## 语言与精度 · 本节重点

number of medals是奖牌数；proportion of gold medals是金牌在奖牌总数中的占比。

## 最后练一练 · 先组织，再写

读熟后，可以先遮住参考，回忆本节最有用的两三句。想动笔时再打开下方写作台，不需要首次学习就完成全文。

### 定点练习

把“the proportion of medals was 2,300”改准。

::: details 写完后看一种参考处理

> The total number of medals was approximately 2,300.

检查它修正了什么意义或关系。可以使用不同措辞，但信息需要准确。

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### 换题使用

**本站自编文字数据 · 与上方原题分开**

自编数据，金/银/铜：甲国90/80/70，乙国40/45/45，丙国50/20/20。写总量排名与构成差异，说明为什么丙国值得单独提及。

先试一段，再视需要写全文。将新内容写在写作台的“迁移”中；原稿留在“初稿”，修订另存到“修改”。图表题需要重新识别特征，书信与议论文需要重新回应任务。

::: details 打开写作台 · 短练、全文与复盘

> The chart below shows the total number of Olympic medals won by twelve different countries.

全文练习至少150词，约20分钟；短练可以先写两三句或一个段落。

**留一个复盘**：我能回忆哪组表达？换了内容后，哪一句还不熟？下一次先检查这个问题。

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